Friday, June 7, 2013

The Civilian Sufferer





After sixty-five years, you’d think someone, somewhere, would be able to find a solution to the Israeli-Palestinian conflict. What people don’t seem to understand is, it won’t disappear if we simply dismiss it as unsolvable. It will remain one of the world’s major issues unless people make an effort for change, for an answer. Some people ask, why even bother? What’s the point? The point is, people are suffering because of this. Not only Palestinians, Israelis, too. Everyone. 1,104 Israelis and 6,829 Palestinians have been killed in the past four years alone. (source) These are the people who aren’t guilty of urging hatred or violence towards the other side. They are the ones who suffer, and it has to stop.

“Life here has turned upside down; there is war in the Middle East. Everybody is afraid. Last night no one slept well, including me... Three Israeli mothers didn’t sleep well, because they were thinking about their sons kidnapped by Hizbullah. Dozens of Palestinian mothers were not sleeping well because they have lost their sons... A lot of religious people, Jews and Muslims, did not sleep well because they were thinking about Joseph’s Tomb and Tiberias Mosque, both destroyed by mobs this week... We hope the leaders will make a quiet situation for us in the Middle East... They must do it quickly. We want to sleep. We want to sleep. We want to sleep.” (source) These are ordinary people. Civilians. Not just Palestinians and not just Israelis. In the quote Sami al Jundi illustrates the hardships of both groups as a result of the war. They aren’t the people in the government, giving orders to continue the attacks. They aren’t the soldiers carrying out those attacks. They are mothers and fathers and sisters and brothers and friends. They could be anyone. They could be you. They are the ones who suffer the most. They are the ones at risk. They are the ones who want and need this to end.
“I expected legal documents, but instead I was looking at childish drawings made with colored pencils and markers. The first was a tank. The second depicted soldiers on a bloody battlefield...‘My nine-year-old son, Nissan, drew these. He was born into this bloody conflict, just like you.’... I examined the images more carefully. One portrayed the little boy’s family outside his house next to a large, leafy tree. Upon closer inspection, even this scene of domestic tranquility showed evidence of war; Nissan had sketched a bomberplane overhead.” (source) War is not something a child should have to grow up with. It is not something that should be considered normal to them, an aspect of daily life. It should not be this way for anyone. Children in Israel are growing up this way. Everywhere they turn, there is war. Everything they hear is about war. It is in their homes, in their schools, in their minds, always. How can they be expected to change things? Much like Sami al Jundi, because of their environment, many of them will grow up with hatred for the other side, because that is all they know. They will continue this endless cycle of violence and instability in what is supposed to be their home and their holy place. If the youth in Israel came together, Palestinians and Israelis alike, and spoke out against the conflict, there could be hope. The people fighting this war are not the ones who are suffering. Terrorists and extremists and the government are not suffering. It’s the people of this land, no matter their background, who are suffering. Their suffering needs to end.

Wednesday, June 5, 2013

A Death Season in Darfur


Chris .T  
Humanities 10C



A Death Season in Darfur

Throughout history there had been moments in our world that we have done things that impacted our society and it can really mess up who we are as humans and we are responsible for the things we do. In history there were times when people end lives of millions because of their background and that they’re different from others and those are known as a genocide. There had been genocides throughout history that really affected people and their way of life for instance the holocaust and the rwandan genocide both impacted society and we as a community do everything we can to resolve that issue. Unfortunatley, we haven’t necessarily ended that issue because today in Darfur, Sudan millions of people are being murdered. Unlike Rwanda, this genocide happens to continue to this day and many lives are being ended everyday and not many people around the world know that this is happening.


The main cause of the genocide was that the sudanese liberation army took arms against the sudanese government and the government responded by unleashing a deadly force known as the janjaweed, a militia supported by the government and their mission is to kill a huge mass of people including young children. In Darfur it’s mostly a muslim society and there were many tribal and economic differences in that area. The government of Sudan saw the muslim society as pure dominant than the other african tribes and this is what also unleashed the Arab janjaweed to target the non arab people because they weren’t as good as them. The United Nations estimates that 300,000 lives were lost in Darfur and ever since the SLA took arms against the government, more than 2.6 million people had been displaced because of the violence.

Very little is done to stop the genocide and not much of the international community is responding to this madness, similar to the Rwandan genocide back in 1994 but some are beginning to take action. In 2004 The United States government declared it as a genocide under the united nations genocide convention. There are currently UN presence in Darfur and they have been trying to stop the genocide and helping the people of Darfur to escape and take refuge, but unfortunately it cannot be stopped.(In March 2009, the International Criminal Court issued an arrest warrant for Sudanese President Omar al-Bashir for directing a campaign of mass killing, rape and pillage against civilians in Darfur, ) The international community also issued an arrest warrant for Sudanese president Omar al Bashir for being the man behind the genocide and sending out the janjaweed to massacre millions of innocent people and destroying their villages.


Sudanese President Omar al-Bashir  Photograph: Philip Dhil/EPA (picture taken by http://www.guardian.co.uk



In the book Darfur Diaries By Adam Shapiro, he goes on a journey to the Darfur region along with other independent film makers Aisha Bain and Jen Marlowe to interview the refugees and survivors that escaped the violence in Darfur. They all hear the different stories from each refugee and they discovered that their family had been killed or missing during the violence and the film also learn how their villages in Darfur had been attacked by government forces of Sudan and the deadly janjaweed militia. Also many children dont have an education due to the government destroying schools. As quoted " The government bombed and destroyed our school, killing people." (45) This was said by a refuge who was being interviewed by the filmmakers and told his experiences. This shows how much the genocide impacts people and their lives have been ruined.




Today this deadly genocide happens to still occurr at this moment as we speak and it's been the worst since the Jewish holocaust during WWII. We as nations of this earth should come together and take action to stop this from continuing. As of now we all know about the UN presence im Darfur and they have assited the darfurians in provding them with food and shelter and health aid. The United nations is not the only organization thats providing help. There are organizations that are not only helping in Darfur, also they are spreading awareness throughout the world.Organizations such as Save Darfur (http://www.savedarfur.org/ )are spreading awareness everywhere around the globe. Their main task is to get the communitys attention and to encourage everyone to take action and to provide aid for the people of Darfur. This organization provides info on how to get involved and steps to take action. They are telling us that we as a society can take action and help stop this from happening.




Jerusalem...Holy land or Battlefield?

Riley Rappaport
10A

                Jerusalem: Holy land or Battlefield?

    Keeping peace is much harder than breaking it. Peace is a valuable part of society that people take for granted and therefore, lose stability between them and the people around them. But what makes peace so easy to break? The answer in this situation is religion and land. Jerusalem was a Holy land for the people of Israel when they formed and then they were attacked 1948 by 6 Arab nations. After the Israelis were attacked, in 1967 they surprise attacked Egypt, Syria, and Jordan and won the war in 6 days. Then in 1987 the Palestinians rose up against the Israelis for their independence. There have been conflicts between Israel, Palestine and the surrounding countries many different occasions, an example of this is Intifada 1 and 2. During warfares many bombs were exchanged between Israel and Palestine leaving many citizens dead. Between 1991 and 2003 there have been about 1000 Israeli deaths and 2550 Palestinian deaths. From the beginning of the first Intifada there have been 5500 Israeli deaths and 24000 Palestinian deaths (source). Between these countries, it is extremely hard to communicate with one another because the languages are different so therefore they can agree to peace or settle things rationally.

Religious warfare has created almost 2000 child deaths and its still growing. The cycle between these conflicts is peace that is followed by bloodshed. Conflict has been growing because the constant battle for  the holy land Jerusalem. Children have been living with this warfare their whole life and have been affected, by loss of family and friends since bombs were blowing up in the streets. Children have also been affected by the conflict by turning into child soldiers. In the book The Hour of Sunlight, we get to know Sami Al Jundi, a Palestinian teenager while the Israeli-Palestinian War was occurring. As a child he felt very strongly about the everlasting conflict and believed all of the stereotypes and single stories of the Israeli people. But as he grew older he also grew more passionate about bombs and warfare because of hardships under the Israeli rule, along with his friends. One day he was assembling a bomb with his friends and it went completely wrong. It ended up blowing up, killing one of his friends and put Sami in jail.   “He was right. I knew I would be in prison for many years. This was my life now. The nearly inedible food was an attempt to weaken us physically and psychologically. It would not work on me, I decided. The next morning, I convinced myself that everything on the breakfast tray tasted like it came from my mother’s kitchen. I cleaned my plate” (Al Jundi 104). After ten years in prison Sami decided to take the non-violence tactic to have political change. He traveled all over Israel, Jerusalem, the West Bank, and the Gaza stip teaching his movement of non-violence. He became a useful source on how a biased person at the beginning can learn from his mistakes and become trustworthy. This goes to show how corrupted people can change into peacemakers. But it also shows how hard it is to keep peace and how easy it is to break it. And when peace is broken, people from both sides die or go to prison.

    So how do we spread awareness about this conflict? One thing we can do to spread awareness is create a partition where student sign it and then give it to the school board. The partition will explain how we need to put this conflict in the curriculum of schools across the board. Another thing that we could do to spread awareness is the media. Although there is already a significant amount of media on this topic, not enough people watch it. But what we can do is create blogs and use online access to the media. Over 500 million people use facebook and 50% of those people log on everyday. If there becomes more awareness about the conflict on facebook, 1 in every 12 people will know about it. 


The Hidden Women

by Keiyana Christie, 10A

“If there’s no peace in Afghanistan, it’s women who will suffer most.” When the Taliban took Afghan under their control, they took with them the rights for every woman, and the happiness that came with them. Even in other places of the world, women lose their rights to work, be happy, and live the life that they have planned for themselves; but that doesn't mean it's okay. It means it's time to put the human rights violation to an end.

In Afghanistan today, almost all the women have become unemployed since the Taliban took control. Laws restrict them from doing certain things without having their husband’s approval, and not abiding by the rules may result in the execution of an Afghan woman. Some women believe so strongly in their rights that they’ve sacrificed their life in the hopes that their friends, family, and children may have freedom in the future.  

One Afghan woman, Seeta, showed her pain through a poem about how she feels hidden under the Taliban. She must wear a burqa (a piece of cloth covering the face and only shows


(Source: cbsnew.com)
the eyes) because those are the requirements given by the Taliban. In a part of her poem she says, "Foreign women come to see us,
under burqa, take our picture—
we are interesting, novel for them.
They don’t understand
our burqas are jail and safety made of fabric.
We are hidden beneath blue cloth,
confined, yet secure."
A piece of cloth alone makes these women feel like they are trapped in a jail cell, and the only way out is to put their entire life at risk. At the same time, they are forced to feel a sense of security because they know if they don't wear this blue piece of cloth, they will be viewed as an outsider, and be executed without any mercy.
(indianexpress.com)
The number of women and children affected by the Taliban grows higher and higher each day. Every year, 309,000 children under the age of five die from malnutrition, and over 90 percent of girls are banned from having an education. Women are not allowed to wear jewelry, paint their nails, cut their hair, or do other things that any average woman would do. One Taliban man said, "There are only two places for Afghan women - in her husband's house, and in the graveyard." These are the things that the women must live by everyday.
So it's clear that the women of Afghanistan are living in a world of darkness everyday, and to make it worse, they must watch their children experience the sadness too. As humans, it's only right that we take action and help to change the lives of these women and children. More importantly, women must understand that this is a serious situation, and that it could've been one of us. We may not be able to stop the Taliban tomorrow, but we can definitely make a change over the course of time.





Saturday, June 1, 2013

No One Deserves a Life of Fear

No matter what the age, race or ethnicity, NO ONE deserves to live a life of violence or fear.
In a variety of locations around the globe, civilians are surrounded by violence and live in fear because of it. In the middle east people live with this fear daily. Specifically in Israel and Palestine. For near a century, Israelis and Palestinians have been disputing over land, including The West Bank, The Gaza Strip, and Jerusalem. The political disputes over the territories have lead to violence and war endangering the lives of innocent civilians in both states. Despite all the effort and support from the UN and international community, an agreement has yet to be made. And as a result the situation is slowly being neglected while violence continues to rise.
    In 2000, Israel proposed an agreement to give Palestine a territory in Gaza and nearly all of the West Bank. The Palestines refused this offer and responded with bombing that killed more than 1000 Israelis. Five Years later, Israel withdrew from Gaza, but the Palestines didn’t populate the region for shelter. Instead they build rocket bases that destroyed towns and villages claiming the lives of many in southern Israel. Due to the constant change of territory, Israelis and Palestinians are frequently interacting with one another which results in violence, injury, and casualties in towns near the Green Line, borders. And when one group is attacked, they retaliate and the violence goes in a cycle. The cycle of violence has resulted in the death of over 2,546 Palestinians and 816 Israelis, and the injury of over 23,930 Palestinians and 5,616 Israelis from the beginning until now. Sadly, young children have been affected by this cycle. Currently, a total of 1,619 kids have lost there life to this conflict in warfare. 129 Israeli children and 1,519 Palestinian children have been victims to this conflict and more and more continue to lose their lives today.
    Imagine your child or loved one at risk every single day because of a situation like this. Even I can’t think of how I would feel if I lost my younger sibling or cousin. I would be absolutely devastated.
    In the memoir, The Hour of Sunlight by Sami Al Jundi, Al Jundi w tells the story of his youth and his hatred for the Israeli occupation and his ambition for overthrowing it. In the beginning of the memoir Al Jundi retells the story of his mothers youth and what she experienced when she was very young. She was also blind, which in her view is a gift and a curse because although she couldn’t see the beautiful things in the world, she couldn’t see the evil. She discussed how her father died when she was young. She said, “My father…was shot in the heart...I was only five years old”, (7, Al-Jundi). In addition to the sorrow of losing her father, she was forced to cope with death threats from Israelis who were responsible for a massacre resulting in the death of over 100 innocent villagers. "[The israelis] are warning us to leave the village or they will do...what they did to the people in Deir Yassin...where over one hundred villagers had been killed", (9, Al-Jundi).
    These massacres, attacks and threats have been extremely frequent and nothing is changing, its only getting worse. As citizens of a privileged country with a strong government to provide us with safety, its our duty to help those abroad who aren't blessed with the privileges that we have. We must raise awareness and spread the word to let the government know that we care for the Israelis and Palestinians before they're are entirely neglected and violence possibly reaches the extremes of genocide. We can use social networking like Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram to spread the word. Together we CAN do this.

Thursday, May 30, 2013

Name Your Price

                                                             NAME YOUR PRICE
                                                                By: Nydia Zapata

( Source: Humanitarian Alliance Blog/http://humanitarianalliance.wordpress.com/tag/offenders/)
Slapped, punched, scratched, slammed, any other violent remark that you could imagine is happening at this moment to a female in this world. This abuse is coming from middle aged men, men like this that are leaving their wives at home and paying these under aged girls for sex. That right here is called sex trafficking, things like this are happening as we speak. Today, yesterday, and the day before that, things like this will even happen tomorrow. Poor innocent little and teenaged girls throwing away their lives to do something someone is forcing them to do. None of this was ever their choice, this life was chosen for them. These girls are going through so much in so little time. They say it takes 9 months for someone to be born, but only a second to die. These girls had no choice in their lives to make the certain discussions they wanted too. Their owners were quick to grab, but even quicker to pull the trigger and end their lives within that one second. This is an issue that has continued to expand over the years.


When I was 5 I was in school, I played with my toys, and I had a nap time. Thats what 5 year olds do, they eat, play, sleep and do other things kids do. One thing a 5 year old doesn't do is be put into sex trafficking. Around the world between 50 and 60 percent of the children who are trafficked into sexual slavery are under age 16 (http://www.oprah.com/oprahshow/Child-Sex-Trafficking-The-Facts). Not only that but an estimated 1.2 million children are trafficked each year. (http://www.oprah.com/oprahshow/Child-Sex-Trafficking-The-Facts) Around the world children are being sold and or trade into sex trafficking for a living. These children aren’t only being put into sex trafficking, but these little girls are having their vaginas sewed back together, so that they would be picked again. One example around the world would be “Men in Cambodia will pay thousand dollars to rape a virgin for a week.” (Mam, pg 59) In my opinion this sounds like the sickest thing that was ever introduced to me as a 15 year girl. When I think about topics like this I put myself in the situation. When I think about things like this I just say to myself that, that one person could be me. That could be me getting punched and slapped. Having the wind knocked right out of me. That could be me bleeding non stop, I could be that 5 year old little girl feeling that needle piercing straight down there. Feeling the thread going in and out and through my vagina. Having the screaming killing my throat. Not only that but having my vagina being reopen over 3 times due to sex. Feeling the cuts and tairs of my vagina being reopened, sewed, reopened, then sewed again. Almost feeling like a knife being cut right into me. Starting off slow, then increasing the pressure. Somebodies nasty sweat falling on my body, having to take all those hits and coming out with scars and bruises, scars and bruises that hold stories. But not only a story but a memory. A memory that would lie with me for as long as I would be able to remember. That memory just might be my whole life, haunting me likes its haunting Somaly Mam today.


(Source: Road of Lost Innocence by Somaly Mam)
    Somaly Mam is one women I would forever respect. This woman wrote a book called The Road of Innocence having to do with everything I’m talking to you about. If anyone were to ever tell me that they hate their lives one more time, I’m seriously going to mention this amazing woman. I respect this woman so much, everything that she’s ever been through has been nothing but hell. She went through rape, being sold to the botherl by her own family. Not only that but this woman right here was only 14 when she got into the lifestyle of being a prostitute. And im only 15, that could’ve been me. Somaly is a strong women that went through alot, there was alot of times that she could’ve ended her life, but she didn’t want too. Even though she was lied too, beaten, raped, sold a few times she forever kept her head held high. She made it through everything, surprisingly. One thing i noticed as I was reading her book was that, she wasn’t always thinking about herself, but other people. Even though it was a situation that requires you to depend on yourself and just try to make out there alive, she actually thought about some people that she had working along with her within the botherl. Somaly Mam opened not only my eyes, but others as well. The amount of awards she won are phenomenal.
  • Prince of Asturias Award for International Cooperation in the presence of Queen Sofia of Spain, 1998
  • CNN Hero, 2006
  • Glamour Woman of the Year 2006
  • Olympic flag bearer, 2006 Winter Olympics Opening Ceremony, Torino, Italy.
  • Honorary Doctor of Public Service from Regis University
  • US State Department “Heroes of Anti-Trafficking” award
  • World's Children's Prize for the Rights of the Child in Sweden for her "dangerous struggle" to defend the rights of children in Cambodia.]
  • Roland Berger Human Dignity Award 2008
  • TIME magazine's 100 most influential people, with the accompanying article written by actress Angelina Jolie, 2009
  • The Guardian Top 100 Women: Activists and Campaigners, 2011
  • The Daily Beast Women in the World, 2011
  • “Mimosa D’Oro”
  • Festival du Scoop Prize, France
  • Excmo Ayuntaniento de Galdar Concejalia de Servicio Sociale, Spain.


    Us as a unit, as the youth can change things like this. Especially us females, we have the right to put an end to this, make things happen and stop sex trafficking for good. We can do things like start petitions organize some type of moment, we have to start small but something small can mean the world to that one 5 year old that could still someday have a childhood. Another thing would be not only talking to females and seeing how we can come together and change something, but also talking to the men and young men. Go into their mind and see what’s going on and why they do the things they do and try to change their thinking a little bit. The smallest things can change something so big, if we just start talking to people.

Israeli and Palestinian Conflict

Noah Katzman
10D
Israeli and Palestinian conflict








    The Israeli-Palestinian conflict is an ongoing struggle between Israelis and Palestinians that began in the early 20th century. The collision between those two forces in southern Levant and the emergence of the Palestinian nationalism in the 1920s, eventually escalated into the Israeli-Palestinian conflict in 1947, and expanded into a wider Arab and Israeli conflict later on. The first Palestinian uprising began in 1987, as a response to regional stagnation. By the early 1990s, international efforts to settle the conflict had begun, in light of the success of the Egyptian-Israeli peace treaty of 1982.
    In the book, Hour of Sunlight by Sami al Jundi, the Israeli- Palestinian conflict affected him because one of his friends died while he tried to overthrow the Israeli Occupation. He was trying to build a bomb to use against the Israeli police, but it exploded earlier and killed his friend. Since Sami al Jundi is Palestinian, this portrays the hatred the two sides have for each other. It shows how far Sami al Jundi will go, to fight for what he believes in, even if it’s dangerous. After leaving prison, he still wanted to fight for his peoples rights, but he used a less violent approach, and cofounded the Middle East program of Seeds of Peace Center for Coexistence, which brings together Palestinian and Israeli youth.


The Evils of Forced Sexual Slavery

By: Marsel Shaqja


“She said she was beaten ferociously to force her to smile and act seductive.” (Kristof, Nicholas) This quote was from an op-ed called “The Evil Behind the Smiles” by Nicholas D. Kristof. This op-ed was written by Nicholas to show people the evils of sex trafficking. She wrote about how they tortured her because she wouldn't smile to a man, and be seductive. She also talked about how people think that slavery was over a long time ago, but sex trafficking is the modernized version of slavery. “Women Are Silver, Women Are Diamonds: Conflicting Images of Women in the Cambodian Print Media” is an article written on JSTOR that talks about a lot of facts about sex trafficking in Cambodia. In the article, it said that virgins were most valuable. So the people who owned the brothels, often sewed their vaginas so that they would get more money out of them.

According to the U.S. State Department’s estimates 600,000 to 800,000 people are being sold into sex slavery yearly. (Kristof, Nicholas) This shows that sex trafficking is growing in alarming rates. Most of these people are female, and vary from the ages of 8 to 16. Women in Cambodia can’t even fight back because they have no power to fight back with. This is due to the fact that the Cambodian government has not taken much action towards women’s rights. And that is why it is an amazing thing to see people like Somaly Mam, a former sex slave that escaped from the brothels, take action against sex trafficking in such a successful way. But she is not the only one to escape from the brothels. “ At age 9, Srey Pov was able to dart away from the brothel and outrun the guard. She found her way to a shelter run by Somaly Mam, an anti-trafficking activist who herself was prostituted as a child.” (Kristof, Nicholas) As seen in this article, Somaly Mam is helping more and more innocent women get away from the brothels. As Somaly said in her book “The Road of Lost Innocence” she will not stop until this terrbile form of slavery stops.
(Sourcer: time.com)
This is Somaly Mam talking about sex
 trafficking at a press conference

People have to be inspired by somebody like Somaly Mam, who is doing everything in her power to stop sex trafficking. Even though one or two people can’t make much of a difference, hundreds and thousands and millions of people can. That is why people like Somaly Mam are amazing and inspiring. Even though they don’t have huge numbers of people supporting them, they do everything in their power to help.

Nicholas Kristof is a man who is trying to reach out to an army of people to help Somaly Mam in this fight to stop sex trafficking. He has made calculations that there are more girls and women getting sex trafficked then there were slaves during the slave trades. But people are treating it as if it is nothing, even though it is a huge thing.


Marsel Shaqja is a sixteen year old boy that attends Frank McCourt Highschool in Manhattan, New York. And he wants there to be a world where there is no pain and violence, and everybody is treated as an equal.

The Fight to freedom in Afghanistan


by Dana Johnson, 10C

Source: Unifem.Org
Individuals could use their powers to enact a change in the community by showing they have a goal, and faith then you could achieve something. Women in Afghanistan showed that it was a long long struggle that they had to overcome .  In the book; The Dressmaker of Khair Khana by Gayle Lemmon shows how the character Kamilia could change one community. She showed that by trust, despite the Taliban war and rules that the afghanistan's women had go through; Kamilia made that decision to start a dressmaking business with her sister. “Malika, I think that if I knew how to sew I could start making dresses at home and perhaps I could sell them to the shops a Lycee Myriam” (56-57). This shows that Kamilia has a goal to have each woman feel good about themselves and to re-live the business in the neighborhood of Khair Khana because it was not fair to the woman because the men were forced to fight in the war, leaving their families behind and leaving the women the household head. Also, Kamilia showed faith. Even though she was afraid because the changes happening in Afghanistan (Khair Khana). She had faith because her father was still fighting in the war and even though she was scared she still believed that Taliban war could downfall.  It was sad to read that in the book because their town was falling apart but Kamilia and her family knew it was 
what right for her family.



The Dressmaker of Khair Khana
We as readers and authors read and write nonfiction stories so history can be relieved. So if you relive it in a book with interesting characters and memories you’ll have The women of Khair Khana connects back on the women of Afghanistan because it makes you think about young girls growing to see the fighting and women taking the lead role it was a pretty tough time. “In truth,  the situation of women in Afghanistan remains appalling,  Armed local warlords have their own rules and governments which brutalize
people- especially women”. (Betrayal, Mariam Rawi). This quote mentioned about Mariam Rawi showed that it is important to read nonfiction because you read about sad true stories and inspires someone. 


Writing could be a tool for changing the society because so many authors likes to picture the paper as if they’re talking to it, in other words, it’s your diary and you’re expressing your thoughts and feelings on your paper. It makes us readers excited and eager. Authors writes stories about the women of Afghanistan to make you feel the emotions from the topic and author. That is exactly what Gayle Lemmon showed while writing The Dressmaker of Khair Khana.  

A Voice for Those Who Have None


by Melissa Lilly, 10D

Almost every girl with brothers understands early, girls don’t get to do everything their brothers do. Their brother gets to stay out until twelve and can do whatever he wants, but his sister cannot.  She cannot be out until midnight because her curfew is six; she has to follow the rules that were made specifically for her, because she is a female. Her brother has different rules, her brother is allowed to do as he wishes when she cannot, she is being marginalized because she is a female. Women are marginalized in societies all over the world and in some cases die because people don’t believe they matter. This has been true for centuries. In ancient civilazations, women were considered property, and were pressed to the margin because the cultures refused to recognize their needs. They were looked at as the inferior sex. This is still true. In the present day cultures, women have less rights than men and in some cases are being trafficked for sexual purposes, so women are still property. This inequality must be eliminated in life.  We must make it so men treat women with the respect that women have been giving men for centuries. The goal is to create equality in this world.  However, so many things are standing in the way.  Sex trafficking must be abolished, women should be able to get an education like men, culture should not decide how to treat the female sex, and women should have just as many rights as men do.


Human trafficking is defined in the dictionary as: “organized criminal activity in which human beings are treated as possessions to be controlled and exploited (as by being forced into prostitution or involuntary labor)” (Merriam-Webster).  One specific type of human trafficking, sex-trafficking is modern day slavery, and millions of women and girls are actually enslaved right now, all other the globe.  According to CRS Report for Congress, “More than 700,000 people are believed to be trafficked each year worldwide; some 50,000 to the United States. Trafficking is now considered the third largest source of profits for organized crime, behind only drugs and weapons, generating billions of dollars annually.” This is horrendous.  In most cases women and girls are taken from their families, homes, countries and shipped to serve in what is called a brothel. A brothel is a house where men can visit prostitutes; however as mentioned most do not come willingly.  And the problem is getting worse.  The prostitution rates continue to increase all over the world, according to Prostitution Policy in Europe: A Time of Change? “In Sweden there are approximately 2,500 prostitutes in a population of 8.5 million (0.3 per 1,000)” So in Sweden alone there are 2, 500 prostitutes, imagine the total number for the world. It’s impossible to know how many of these women are slaves, but whatever the number is, it’s too many if they are there against their will.
At brothels girls are raped, beaten and can come into contact with disease such as HIV, other STD’s which brand a female for life.  Brothels are meant to break these girls and women and take advantage of them by rape, threats, forcefulness and embarrassment. Women die in these brothels, on the streets, because of diseases they get from of being forced into such a trade.  However, as the book Half the Sky points out, “Women are not dying because of untreatable disease. They are dying because societies have yet to make the decision that their lives are worth saving” (Kristof and WuDunn 116).  These women could be treated from disease, and from death, but they are not treated because women are seen as the less superior sex.  And this is just one example of this.  Trafficking has such an enormous effect on girls and women that it is indescribable. It has such a traumatic effect on the mental, emotional and physical wellbeing of the women and girls that it involves itself with. These trafficked women undergo dangerous emotional anxiety, such as humiliation, unhappiness, distress, wariness and suicidal thoughts. Victims every so often receive post-traumatic stress disorder for such a disturbing experience that has mentally scarred them for life.  In all conscience, this is absolutely inexcusable.

Sex trafficking is just one way men still make women an inferior sex.  One’s culture also has an enormous impact on how women are perceived. In multiple countries women are treated differently from men. As it says in the Half the Sky, females in China, for instance, almost never went to school and were sold to become sex slaves before giving them a chance at life, “Girls were rarely educated, often sold, and vast numbers ended up in the brothels of Shanghai” (Kristof and WuDunn 207).  Knowledge is one of the most amazing things that people must work towards; an education teaches us to explore, to think and investigate what is and what could be. With an education a person can see the truth in things for themselves so they will never have to be dependent on another. Furthermore it strengthens a person’s gifts, skills and gives them a chance to reach their full potential. But to never be given that opportuntiy is incredibly unfair; and frequently the brightest children are born into families who cannot support nor want to give them the education that they rightfully deserve because their culture says that women should stay at home rather than go to school with the boys.

Sex slaves and culture are just a few examples of the double standards of life, but women’s rights is most definitely another. Globally, women have far less rights than men do which is completely imbalanced.  Laws help people to live in peace, so having unbalanced laws is harmful to the female sex. Yet, people have refused to equalize it.  According to Virginia Law Review, “Equality of rights implies equality of law.  As well as equality in the administration of the law. Without equal application of the law there cannot be equal rights.”  The law must change so there can be balance but it is clear as day that men want to keep the law favoring them. For example the story of Goretti in Half the Sky, In Burundi, Africa she was a prisoner in her hut, for she and other women in her region had to ask her husband’s permission to leave their home. The men were in charge of their wives even when they weren’t home, and in Goretti’s case her husband Bernard was a horrible and nasty man and did not like to let her leave. Goretti, mother of six, wife, and the age 35 was not allowed to leave her home even to the market. They were barely making enough to survive and didn’t buy mosquito nets to help prevent malaria that is very dangerous for the reason being that Bernard was spending the little money they did make on trips to the bar, and beer which happened to be 30 percent of the family’s nonrefundable earnings. However Goretti was a woman, which means she had not gotten an education and was not permitted to buy anything or deal with money at all. She was a mother of six and still had no say in their protection from malaria or how to spend the money they had to benefit her children. Actually the only communication with her husband was when he beat her and when he forced her into having sex with him. She was home all day every day and didn’t know anyone, she was alone, for in Burundi it is said that it is a wife’s responsibility to cook, stay in the house or work in the fields, which is exactly what Goretti did. But she hated it, she wanted her freedom, but alas she couldn’t have it if she stayed in the same routine that she was in. She soon heard about a program called CARE, it was a program that focused on the needs of women and girls. She thought she had to go, so she asked her husband, and his response was no. So, she didn’t go, but the more Goretti heard about this wondrous program the more her heart longed to go, so she went, without consent and that was the first step she took towards helping herself. Goretti soon became president of a new CARE association that she created and soon her life changed for the better. She was able to handle money and spend it how she wanted it, on fertilizer for her garden, her loan etc... Goretti says, “This was a culture where women couldn’t speak” (Kristof and WuDunn 201). Now she has the courage to use the voice she was pressured to not use, she is able to be part of the community, she has her freedom.
People can use their power to enact change in the global community by using their voice, by getting the courage to speak their minds even though they are pressured into silence. Goretti is just one example of how just one woman can make a change; how women have been seen as inferior but are far from it.  Small organizations, small voices, can bring attention to a subject that can be dear to one’s heart, whether it is to raise money to help improve something or a blog post to get the idea across, people can make a change, it is all up to if they actually do it. Nonfiction is read to gain knowledge, which is one of the best things to obtain. Nonfiction is read and is important because it helps one learn about a topic(s), to understand the difference between what is real and what is imaginary. Writing can be a tool for changing a society, the power it has is so vast that even if you do not enjoy it, everyone does it. Writing something powerful has the capability to encourage, to motivate, to change lives, minds, and even change history. It has the power to make a change, but people just don’t see it that way yet, they haven’t realized that just one person can make a huge change, and writing is one way in which it can occur.
The inquality that is happening towards women must come to an end. Women and men should be treated as equals. Sex trafficing must be eliminated, women should get an education just like men, culture should not influence how you treat women and women should have the same rights as men.